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So, the episode suggested Cameron is not a great father as Emmett's unusual actions didn't bother him or concern him. That's sadly shame... I am sure Emmett won't be happy that Bay told his mom. No one would like to deal with such emotional situations for gone in wrong paths. One of my relatives had her addiction that really effected my whole family. Well, it is a long story... I completely understand Melody's feeling about that. I must say that she's very lucky that she can take care of his minor son when your relative is an adult that you can't do anything unless something happens to your beloved one. Hell, it is so hard to watch a loved one self-destruct and be powerless to stop it on him/her own. My hope is that they face the consequences quickly, so that they may want to make a change sooner.
I am forward to see how and what Melody will do with her son. Poor Bay...
Anyway, it is for my mini critique. I think they need to work on a few things for improvement. In my opinion, I don't think they need to zoom into see their hands so close. When ASL comes in, it is always better to keep an eye where they sign and to make sure you can clearly see their arms and hands. Never to record their back that you can't see their 'talking' hands because someone should record at side or front in better views and angles. But, keep the picture clear and simple. To cut 'talking' hands out of in-screen is kinda of big no-no. I can see what Kalista tried to say something important.
But, I think I realize writers are probably still "new" to how handle with signings and body languages. That probably explains why. If they ask me for my opinion, I would suggest to visit ASL Films site, or to find some Deaf actors and Deaf actresses on YouTube for short story (or movie) to get some idea. That might help with their work better. It is really up to them.
EDIT: I forget to add something. I feel closed captioning should be a bit slow. I sometimes have a hard time to catch up when it rolled so fast. I somewhat get what episode is really about.
So, the episode suggested Cameron is not a great father as Emmett's unusual actions didn't bother him or concern him. That's sadly shame... I am sure Emmett won't be happy that Bay told his mom. No one would like to deal with such emotional situations for gone in wrong paths. One of my relatives had her addiction that really effected my whole family. Well, it is a long story... I completely understand Melody's feeling about that. I must say that she's very lucky that she can take care of his minor son when your relative is an adult that you can't do anything unless something happens to your beloved one. Hell, it is so hard to watch a loved one self-destruct and be powerless to stop it on him/her own. My hope is that they face the consequences quickly, so that they may want to make a change sooner.
I am forward to see how and what Melody will do with her son. Poor Bay...
Anyway, it is for my mini critique. I think they need to work on a few things for improvement. In my opinion, I don't think they need to zoom into see their hands so close. When ASL comes in, it is always better to keep an eye where they sign and to make sure you can clearly see their arms and hands. Never to record their back that you can't see their 'talking' hands because someone should record at side or front in better views and angles. But, keep the picture clear and simple. To cut 'talking' hands out of in-screen is kinda of big no-no. I can see what Kalista tried to say something important.
But, I think I realize writers are probably still "new" to how handle with signings and body languages. That probably explains why. If they ask me for my opinion, I would suggest to visit ASL Films site, or to find some Deaf actors and Deaf actresses on YouTube for short story (or movie) to get some idea. That might help with their work better. It is really up to them.
EDIT: I forget to add something. I feel closed captioning should be a bit slow. I sometimes have a hard time to catch up when it rolled so fast. I somewhat get what episode is really about.
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