KarissaMann05 Active Member Premium Member Joined May 11, 2007 Messages 6,879 Reaction score 7 Jun 23, 2008 #21 Sweet and wonderful. I agreed with Shel and Auggie, get it published!
B Brian New Member Joined Mar 5, 2003 Messages 4,747 Reaction score 1 Jun 23, 2008 #22 Beautifully written poem, DeafBajaGal! Like other suggested, get this published.
Bottesini Old Deaf Ranter Premium Member Joined Mar 17, 2008 Messages 43,645 Reaction score 504 Jun 23, 2008 #23 Very well written, but it is very painful and sad.
deafbajagal New Member Joined Nov 6, 2007 Messages 5,168 Reaction score 5 Aug 9, 2008 #24 Yeah, it is very painful - I was crying when I wrote it since it was based on an actual scene from my childhood. Thanks to everyone for their support. I didn't expect to get so many PMs about the poem, which I appreciate. HUGS!
Yeah, it is very painful - I was crying when I wrote it since it was based on an actual scene from my childhood. Thanks to everyone for their support. I didn't expect to get so many PMs about the poem, which I appreciate. HUGS!
D dead money New Member Joined Jun 12, 2008 Messages 1,495 Reaction score 0 Aug 10, 2008 #25 truly exceptional. its really touching, you cant help but smile and think back years of my own childhood anyway. <3
truly exceptional. its really touching, you cant help but smile and think back years of my own childhood anyway. <3