Comments and Criticism needed on ASL Flyer

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tigersharkdude

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Im wanting to start up a weekly group type deal where ASL students and users can meet up to practice and talk to each other. We dont have anything like that right now in the area :(


Ive made this flyer (blacked out my info), it has to be black and white. Can any of my fellow members give me some C&C?

ASLPracticeflyeronlineversion.jpg
 
tigersharkdude said:
Im wanting to start up a weekly group type deal where ASL students and users can meet up to practice and talk to each other. We dont have anything like that right now in the area :(


Ive made this flyer (blacked out my info), it has to be black and white. Can any of my fellow members give me some C&C?

ASLPracticeflyeronlineversion.jpg
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"...this is not a class...."

You don't need a comma before "but."
 
Are there any expenses (such as for food and drinks) involved? Any other details needed, such as for directions, or is the location well known?
 
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