My gawd - that was a terrific storyline! The drawing is raw, yet near-professional!
A li'l tip - work a bit more on the expressions on the characters! Otherwise, you guys got it goin'!
Hope to see more of your work!
BTW - did Shao draw it by hand with ink, or did he draw it with a mouse? It looks like it was done totally on computer.
If that is the case, encourage Shao to give freehand drawing on paper a shot. It'd look a lot better - scanned, then computer-colored. What d'ya think?
Well, Shao decided to not use that method anymore. He used to draw it with a mouse. It was about two years ago. Of course, his style changed a lot. So, don't worry about it.
Oh, yeah, I know it's a great storyline. I think it's law in the comedy world that all stories must came with many sweet and sour ironies in there.