In my humble opinion, I do think the author of that "Written ASL" was trying to mock it and I do thank the author for doing it because it is opening my eyes to a valuable lesson. I've come to really appreciate English as a whole because I love poetry and composing poems, stories and so on. When I read "Written ASL", I felt it underminded the true English syntax. William Shakespeare would roll in his grave if he read that! The Misanthropic Bitch would just have a field day with the lot of youse. However, it is your right to have "Written ASL" and I respect you all to it. I cannot judge you as I prefer English and however you choose is your right.
http://www.misanthropic-bitch.com/deaf_as_i_wanna_be.html