Signing ASL to an English song is very difficult! I understand that you want to keep the words used in the song to match the signs, but you want it to be ASL at the same time! It's like scrambling it up and then unscrambling it again. 
I understand the exaggerated signs because I can hear the rise in the music. To someone who doesn't know ASL, it would look like an expressive dance.
I think you did a great job! Signing to songs is not easy! 
