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Another importaint Mel gibson movie should be created about star trek and religion. Heres the story tell me what you think?
"" Star trek X the undiscovered galaxy""
William Shatner,Leonard Nimoy,Walter Koenig make one last apperance on a star trek movie. Kirk,Spock and Chekov are the federations top chief commanders.
Kirk is the president of the federation his top 2 advisers are Spock and Chekov.
Meanwhile Jean-Luc Picard is the general and major William T. Riker who both having a conflict against president kirk who demands you look into a stange galaxy that has a sun 15,000 times bigger than our solar system. It has over 50 planets yet to be discovered. They are 20 to 200 times bigger than earth. (picard) But theres is a risk of 10 or more aliens do not want you to disrupt their evoinment. (kirk) They must be looked into and discovered (Picard) Mr President its a extremely high risk factors they would attack whoever enters their airspace and if they find out about us they will go an all out attack on the federation. ""Mr spock trys to convince data its worth looking into and find out a way to see if the aliens will not temp to fight the federation"". (Data)There might be a way but its kinda slick and like pulling a dirty trick. (Spock)what you have in mind? (data)Use the romulans as bait, but if the aliens take the romulans as welcome visitors it could backlash and the romulans might might gain a a few more new powerful allies. So data explains the idea to general Picard and Riker and both were smiling like it the craziest idea they ever hear of? (Picard) Let ask president we can work out this idea. So picard went to president kirk and explan the idea,,(Kirk)What?? Feed the romulans into this?? Well,,It might not be a such a bad idea. (Picard) but you do understand the risks and dangers? (Kirk) I risked all kinds of dangers during my career and say lets put this on all the marbles. So kirk contacted the romulan chairman and said,(kirk),Ill be willing sign a treaty that will possibily end of our conflicts and will be signed and sealed if you discover a new galaxy that has more you can imagine.(romulan president) Can i gather conferance with the senate see what they think it might take a while.(kirk) Sure take as much as time as you like. Time passed romulans came back and said Kirk,, We discussed it tell us here where is this stange galaxy youre talking about. He showed the map on the screen and 50 planets and a huge giant sun. Romulan chairperson says STOP!! I had heard enough!! This disscussion has ended!! Kirk looked a little disgusted at picard and riker (kirk) Have anymore bright ideas general? major??? both said no sir...(kirk) Dismissed! (picard) i was sure romulans would look into this..(riker) i wonder what president kirk is thinking about the mess. **Time passed** Kirk was reading news on his computers and the business of the federation and all the sudden Chekov came president kirk!! what is it chekov?? Look puts screen on showing an massive romulan fleet heading towards the undiscovered galaxy. (kirk) I knew it al along! they set us up again, They have no desire for peace! Should we alert the general? No chekov,, Just wait till what develops here ..When the general finds out he will contact me and ill know what to say. <<General picard to kirk!>> Yes general theres is a large attack on the the undiscovered galaxy what are your orders sir. (kirk) we wait on what happens here..I think the romulans made a big mistake. (Picard) are you sure mr president? (kirk) I cant be too sure i just have a gut feeling we should wait.. << Spock to kirk >>(kirk) Go ahead spock Romulans have destroyed alien popluation on 10 of the 50 planets No wait!! there are re-enforcements comming from 30 other alien fleets (kirk) Spock!! <<yes mr prersident>> Im going to contact general picard.. Kirk to picard << Yes mr president? >> I have changed my mind lets go on in << Over and out mr president>> (chekov) Are you insane?? (kirk) I have got into this idea lets help em out ( chekov) Yes mr president. ** time passed ** Federation ships move towards the galaxy (Picard) Takes command on the U.S.S Enterprise NX-01. As federation ship engage to battle (picard) Data tell me what languge theyre speaking. (Data) Yes general. (Data) It seems theyre speaking english sir.(picard) Find out who their leader is ** time passed ** General (picard) yes data hes Reverend General Shallom (picard) Reverend? A preist ? What in the,,,, Never mind just get me the reverend (Data) Yes general .... << This is Reverend Shallom,,, who i am speaking to and what is your demand?>> ( No demands reverend) << Ohh then what is your business here to destroy us?? ,,>> (picard) No reverend we want to help if you allow to fight the enemy we might get this thing over with and i know everything about the bible...<< You do ?? Ok explan to what the book of exodus 19:1-2 is about?>> (picard) That would be the ten commandments.. I bet your enemy does not respect any of this whatever you have is what they want and theyre gonna take it without surrender so if you allow us to fight along your side we can make great progress together.<< Very well >> (picard) Screen ends Ok engage data!! (yes sir general! ) ""As the battles continued romulans surrended many romulians fleets were destroyed "" President Kirk visit the great planet called "Genesis" ,General Reverend Shallom greets president kirk and said thank you (Reverend Shallom) We are a peaceful religious society. We obey all gods laws. ( kirk) well we were trying that on earth for over 2400 years ever since a man name jesus were preaching to us about peace and loving our neigbors and our enemies as well with forgiveness of others who trespass against us.( Reverend Shallom) You know jesus?(kirk) No i never met him i read about him. ( Reverend Shallom) He is here! with us . He travels to every galaxy preaches peace they they can better themselves then he leaves them and they decide what life they want to lead.(kirk) You mean like being put on the cross? passes on and leaves? (Reverend Shallom) Thats to your people.. Jesus doesnt leave the same way there are many ways he leaves the people and most of them isnt about death. (kirk) Well its nice meeting you..Maybe if you can ask jesus come back to earth and give us a second lecture about peace and repect we might just listen this time.(Reverend Shallom) He will return he promises you that in the bible.(kirk) Well i have to get back to our people we have a lot of work to do,,If theres anything the federation can do give us a call (Reverend Shallom) Thank you again sir.. As the shake hands,,(kirk) and Ok scotty beam us up.. Gets back to U.S.S Enterprise NX-01. ( Kirk) Picard take us home ( yes mr president) (spock) Mr president i think where you were could been heaven. Thats gods undiscovered galaxy.(kirk) Could be mr spock ..Could be ""Movie ends""
What do you think ? good movie or not??
"" Star trek X the undiscovered galaxy""
William Shatner,Leonard Nimoy,Walter Koenig make one last apperance on a star trek movie. Kirk,Spock and Chekov are the federations top chief commanders.
Kirk is the president of the federation his top 2 advisers are Spock and Chekov.
Meanwhile Jean-Luc Picard is the general and major William T. Riker who both having a conflict against president kirk who demands you look into a stange galaxy that has a sun 15,000 times bigger than our solar system. It has over 50 planets yet to be discovered. They are 20 to 200 times bigger than earth. (picard) But theres is a risk of 10 or more aliens do not want you to disrupt their evoinment. (kirk) They must be looked into and discovered (Picard) Mr President its a extremely high risk factors they would attack whoever enters their airspace and if they find out about us they will go an all out attack on the federation. ""Mr spock trys to convince data its worth looking into and find out a way to see if the aliens will not temp to fight the federation"". (Data)There might be a way but its kinda slick and like pulling a dirty trick. (Spock)what you have in mind? (data)Use the romulans as bait, but if the aliens take the romulans as welcome visitors it could backlash and the romulans might might gain a a few more new powerful allies. So data explains the idea to general Picard and Riker and both were smiling like it the craziest idea they ever hear of? (Picard) Let ask president we can work out this idea. So picard went to president kirk and explan the idea,,(Kirk)What?? Feed the romulans into this?? Well,,It might not be a such a bad idea. (Picard) but you do understand the risks and dangers? (Kirk) I risked all kinds of dangers during my career and say lets put this on all the marbles. So kirk contacted the romulan chairman and said,(kirk),Ill be willing sign a treaty that will possibily end of our conflicts and will be signed and sealed if you discover a new galaxy that has more you can imagine.(romulan president) Can i gather conferance with the senate see what they think it might take a while.(kirk) Sure take as much as time as you like. Time passed romulans came back and said Kirk,, We discussed it tell us here where is this stange galaxy youre talking about. He showed the map on the screen and 50 planets and a huge giant sun. Romulan chairperson says STOP!! I had heard enough!! This disscussion has ended!! Kirk looked a little disgusted at picard and riker (kirk) Have anymore bright ideas general? major??? both said no sir...(kirk) Dismissed! (picard) i was sure romulans would look into this..(riker) i wonder what president kirk is thinking about the mess. **Time passed** Kirk was reading news on his computers and the business of the federation and all the sudden Chekov came president kirk!! what is it chekov?? Look puts screen on showing an massive romulan fleet heading towards the undiscovered galaxy. (kirk) I knew it al along! they set us up again, They have no desire for peace! Should we alert the general? No chekov,, Just wait till what develops here ..When the general finds out he will contact me and ill know what to say. <<General picard to kirk!>> Yes general theres is a large attack on the the undiscovered galaxy what are your orders sir. (kirk) we wait on what happens here..I think the romulans made a big mistake. (Picard) are you sure mr president? (kirk) I cant be too sure i just have a gut feeling we should wait.. << Spock to kirk >>(kirk) Go ahead spock Romulans have destroyed alien popluation on 10 of the 50 planets No wait!! there are re-enforcements comming from 30 other alien fleets (kirk) Spock!! <<yes mr prersident>> Im going to contact general picard.. Kirk to picard << Yes mr president? >> I have changed my mind lets go on in << Over and out mr president>> (chekov) Are you insane?? (kirk) I have got into this idea lets help em out ( chekov) Yes mr president. ** time passed ** Federation ships move towards the galaxy (Picard) Takes command on the U.S.S Enterprise NX-01. As federation ship engage to battle (picard) Data tell me what languge theyre speaking. (Data) Yes general. (Data) It seems theyre speaking english sir.(picard) Find out who their leader is ** time passed ** General (picard) yes data hes Reverend General Shallom (picard) Reverend? A preist ? What in the,,,, Never mind just get me the reverend (Data) Yes general .... << This is Reverend Shallom,,, who i am speaking to and what is your demand?>> ( No demands reverend) << Ohh then what is your business here to destroy us?? ,,>> (picard) No reverend we want to help if you allow to fight the enemy we might get this thing over with and i know everything about the bible...<< You do ?? Ok explan to what the book of exodus 19:1-2 is about?>> (picard) That would be the ten commandments.. I bet your enemy does not respect any of this whatever you have is what they want and theyre gonna take it without surrender so if you allow us to fight along your side we can make great progress together.<< Very well >> (picard) Screen ends Ok engage data!! (yes sir general! ) ""As the battles continued romulans surrended many romulians fleets were destroyed "" President Kirk visit the great planet called "Genesis" ,General Reverend Shallom greets president kirk and said thank you (Reverend Shallom) We are a peaceful religious society. We obey all gods laws. ( kirk) well we were trying that on earth for over 2400 years ever since a man name jesus were preaching to us about peace and loving our neigbors and our enemies as well with forgiveness of others who trespass against us.( Reverend Shallom) You know jesus?(kirk) No i never met him i read about him. ( Reverend Shallom) He is here! with us . He travels to every galaxy preaches peace they they can better themselves then he leaves them and they decide what life they want to lead.(kirk) You mean like being put on the cross? passes on and leaves? (Reverend Shallom) Thats to your people.. Jesus doesnt leave the same way there are many ways he leaves the people and most of them isnt about death. (kirk) Well its nice meeting you..Maybe if you can ask jesus come back to earth and give us a second lecture about peace and repect we might just listen this time.(Reverend Shallom) He will return he promises you that in the bible.(kirk) Well i have to get back to our people we have a lot of work to do,,If theres anything the federation can do give us a call (Reverend Shallom) Thank you again sir.. As the shake hands,,(kirk) and Ok scotty beam us up.. Gets back to U.S.S Enterprise NX-01. ( Kirk) Picard take us home ( yes mr president) (spock) Mr president i think where you were could been heaven. Thats gods undiscovered galaxy.(kirk) Could be mr spock ..Could be ""Movie ends""
What do you think ? good movie or not??
