That sounds good. I just sent one to Obama. Haven't had time to do the others yet this morning.
You want to sound like individuals and not like an organized attack machine. They will think someone is lying.
But, you could post a good example and let people follow the idea with their own styles. I hope that made sense.
Here is pretty much what I said:
Dear Senator Obama,
First I want to thank you for your compassion for the American people and their needs. It is desperately needed at this time in our history. I wish you good luck with your campaign.
I am writing at this time to let you know that I am worried about many issues concerning the Deaf community. One of the biggest concerns I have are over education. I am wanting to know if you would be willing to meet with some representatives of the Deaf community so we can present our concerns.
Thank you very much for your time.
Jeanie ............
Next, you get one of puter geniuses to create a web site that has a place to vote about what your concerns are. Then you get someone like Jillio to write a proposal. Then, if they start answering the emails, which will take a few weeks, if they get enough emails, you can go to your web site and let everyone know... Then you pick some people to take your concerns to them. First you need to have your concerns in writing with a viable proposal to offer,,, Example,,, BIBI programs,,, or captioning.. YOu have to let them know why you need a change, and what you want them to get behind.
