I think I did not smile myself, look sad when reunited with girl

[matajan]

I am confessed I did not smile myself, look sad or depression on my facial expression when reunited with girl. what could i do?

cuz of my depression from the past and cause by someone who cried of guys

 

[TWA]

goddamn, that is poetry!

 

[TXgolfer]

No son........

Hope and memories

Fall returns a long lost love

It is bittersweet

that's poetry

 

[TWA]

I am confessed
I did not smile myself, look sad
or depression on my facial
expression when reunited
with girl. what could i do?

cuz of my depression
from the past and cause by
someone
who cried of guys

How about now with line breaks? I think this is actually better than 90% of the shit my creative writing students handed in.

 

[TXgolfer]

How about now with line breaks? I think this is actually better than 90% of the shit my creative writing students handed in.

*snaps fingers*

 

[TWA]

the last line is a knockout

 

[JClarke]

 

[TXgolfer]

I still prefer my Haiku

 

[TWA]

Haikus are for talentless hacks.

 

[TXgolfer]

Anger inside me

Much rage against poster above

a hack I think not