smithr,
From the way you write, it seems like you're writing in ASL-like syntax.
English is a complex language with a lot of "function words" meaning that you have to use a lot of "a", "the", or "an" in order to use the terms correctly. For example, if you were to say, "I have cable", it means you have a service. If you say, "I don't have a cable" it means differently, it means you have no wire that connects to a TV. The same can be said for "I am taking the pill" which means "birth control", not just a pill.
My opinion is that you would be SO much better off starting with Dr. Suess and other popular children's book... and try to "click" when reading. you also would benefit from having someone who is fluent in ASL and explain to you in English while reading. And then you will need to write/type in English. It will take over a year to get a better grasp of English so patience is important.
Good luck with learning English.
