Here's my poem

[Deafghostfreak]

"Tomorrow,tomorrow"

Tomorrow,tomorrow
What a great day
I love ya
tomorrow, I will see beauiful island
tomorrow,tomorrow
What a hectic day
I love ya
tomorrow,I will see you grow tall!
tomorrow,tomorrow
I love ya guys!
How wonderful are ya!
tomorrow, I will see dolphins jumps over around ocean
tomorrow,tomorrow
tomorrow will be not same
I love ya
what a day
What a beauiful land
Tomorrow,tomorrow
pain will not same
hopefully tomorrow is all fresh new
tomorrow,tomorrow

Hope you guys like my poem

 

[Fly Free]

reminds me of the classic movie ANNIE with her theme song "Tomorrow" --

but is a well written poem

 

[Teekie]

That's what that poem reminded me of.. but a good poem tho

 

[nozobo]

TMW TMW ILY TMW YOU'RE ONLY A DAY AWAY!!!! LOL

 

[Teekie]

Originally posted by pimpdaddyposse
TMW TMW ILY TMW YOU'RE ONLY A DAY AWAY!!!! LOL

 

[Deafghostfreak]

Thanks, Teekie

 

[SilenceGold]

Nice classic touch to a hopeful future outlook.

 

[javapride]

heheh CUTE poem WTG and it DOES remind me of ANNIE movie

 

[GoldenLeaf74]

nice poem Deafghostfreak

 

[Deafghostfreak]

Thanks, Goldenleaf and Javapride

 

[saxxykitty78]