Glossing and interpretation

[AnnaJean]

Hey I was wondering if someone might help me with double checking my glossing and interpretation of the song Say Something by A Great Big World. If you can help that's be great


This is what I have

Say Something


Say something, I'm giving up on you
SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 GIVE UP
I'll be the one, if you want me to
FUTURE Pro:1 Pro:2 [your] LOVE, IF Pro:2 [you] WANT
Anywhere I would've followed you
PAST WHERE Pro:2 [you] WANT Pro:1 FOLLOW
Say something, I'm giving up on you
SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 FINISHED WAITING

And I am feeling so small
Pro:1 FEEL(?) INSECURE
It was over my head, I know nothing at all
TOO-MUCH! Pro:1 KNOW NOTHING

And I will stumble and fall
FUTURE Pro:1 STUMBLE /body shift/ FALL(in love)
I'm still learning to love
Pro:1 LEARN HOW LOVE STILL
Just starting to crawl
Pro:1 START UNDERSTAND

Say something, I'm giving up on you
SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 GIVE UP
I'm sorry that I couldn't get to you
SORRY CHANGE Pro:2 [your] MIND Pro:1 DIDN'T
Anywhere, I would've followed you
PAST WHERE Pro:2[you] WANT Pro:1 FOLLOW
Say something, I'm giving up on you
SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 FINISHED WAITING

And I will swallow my pride
You're the one that I love
THIS DIFFICULT
Pro:2[you] Pro:1[my] ONLY LOVE
And I'm saying goodbye
BUT Pro:1 SAY BYE

Say something, I'm giving up on you
SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 GIVE UP
And I'm sorry that I couldn't get to you
SORRY CHANGE Pro:2[your] MIND Pro:1DIDN'T
And anywhere, I would've followed you
PAST WHERE Pro:2[you] WANT Pro:1 FOLLOW
Oh-oh-oh-oh say something, I'm giving up on you
['O' hands] SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 FINISHED WAITING

Say something, I'm giving up on you
SAY SOMETHING, Pro:1 GIVE UP
Say something...
SAY SOMETHING PLEASE


[shake head] I LOVE YOU STILL



Thank you ahead of time for helping

 

[MangaReader]

Hope you can find someone to interpret your song.

 

[AnnaJean]

Hope you can find someone to interpret your song.

I'm sorry no and I suppose it did come off a bit rude. I didn't realize until after I posted. But I wasn't asking for an interpretation, I was asking for help and an opinion. I'm sorry if it was a bit rude though

 

[MangaReader]

I'm sorry no and I suppose it did come off a bit rude. I didn't realize until after I posted. But I wasn't asking for an interpretation, I was asking for help and an opinion. I'm sorry if it was a bit rude though

Nah, I don't consider it rude but just that I thought it was better if you introduced yourself first so people can get the idea who you are and be more inclined to help you. Welcome to the forum!

It's a nice song. I'm completely deaf and not into songs so I can't really help you. Signing songs are beautiful with expressions and certain exaggerations of the signs. I've seen interpreters sign songs and they make it look beautiful to watch.

 

[AnnaJean]

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[AnnaJean]

Nah, I don't consider it rude but just that I thought it was better if you introduced yourself first so people can get the idea who you are and be more inclined to help you. Welcome to the forum!

Ok and thank you