A Poem For My Love.

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If I could choose one person,
Only one, and nothing more,
To always have and always hold,
To cherish and adore,

If I could make one’s heart beat,
A little faster than before,
And fill them up with butterflies,
To earn an even score,

If I could love them equal,
-As they do I- and call a truce,
Always knowing, always careful,
Of their love not to abuse,

Lastly

If I could give one smile,
To any person that I’d choose,
Without a doubt you know- my love-
I’d do this all for you.


-The Rab :ily:
 
Very nice and well written! :thumb:

Undoubtly, you have good writing talent and keep it going too-- ;)

As for myself, I do write poems from time to time as well...nice to see a very good and constructive poem that's meaningful and expresses a genuine feeling as well. :)

Well done.




~RR
 
Your poem is very good I love it! Nothing wrong with your own creative words.
 
Nice Poem you got there, You have a way with the words. So simple but yet, so impactful and meaningful. Keep that in your agenda and you will be able to flourish into something wonderful! ;)

I also love writing poems too. I think my poetry skills has somewhat declined but I've started getting back on that recently. It's kinda rusty but I'm getting there, I hope! :lol:
 
yep yep artist to artist your e good man so smooth so rhythmic and its like an echoing fluid you could keep on staring on it
 
Wow very lovely poem you written for your gf, that would have been a nice Christmas gift :)
 
I admire people who can write poems. I have tried but I just dont know how to make it look fluid and in sync.

Beautiful poem! Your love's heart must have melted? :)
 
I love it man! :h5: I admire poems so much and even the ones I get from my boyfriend, he's really romancing, he just melts my heart. I'm most certain your girlfriend has her heart melts too with every poem you've written to her, expressing your love is always a good way of showing how much you truly love someone. :)
 
Nice Poem, Rab :) I love to write poems but i havent done that in long time. I should write again. :)
 


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