a memorial myspace page

bruisedhalo

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I made this myspace page for river phoenix for the person he was besides a teen idol and an amazing actor. He was a unique kind hearted individual.

if you're a fan of his add my page, and don't forget to leave a comment for river.
 
the background is hard to read. Can you change something else that I can read better?

Thanks
 
The writing is hard to see. using dark colors on a dark background makes it a bit harder to see what has been written. But otherwise it's a good page.
 
Whoa... horrible use of colors! Sorry.

It's not good to use dark grey (or transparent gray) on black. It's also not a good idea to make your pictures transparent like that either.

The links (Contact, Add, Message, etc) are hard to read. It's better with plain text, not cursive.

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